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Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe

141 words · 9 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague said he is lucky to represent the people of his riding, Lac-Saint-Jean. I would like to gently correct him. As far as I know, he did not win the lottery to get here. He has duly earned the respect and support of his constituents. My colleague highlighted how ineffective this government has been over the last 11 years, but looking forward, I was excited about the proposal he brought forward. It is great to hear a Bloc Québécois MP from Lac-Saint-Jean speak so enthusiastically about the future of Canada’s north. I find that very interesting. He also talked about the federal government’s impact on his region. I do not want to start a war between Lac-Saint-Jean and Saguenay, but could my colleague talk about the importance of the Bagotville military base, which Canada established during the Second World War precisely to protect the aluminum industry that made it possible to build the aircraft that would liberate the world from Nazism?”
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Average 86 / 100
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Thanks 4%Claims 64%Anecdote 32%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 6 wordsmy colleague knows his history well.Thanks Claims · 45 wordsThat is indeed the reason why the Bagotville base was created.1 It was to protect the aluminum smelters, which were a key sector in the war effort. Indeed, there are good federal jobs, but my colleagues should know that these jobs are in La Baie. Anecdote · 45 wordsSpeaking of La Baie and Saint-Félicien, the drive between the two locations still takes a good two and a half hours.2 The drive between my town, Alma, and my colleague’s riding is shorter. That should give you some idea. Still, it is a long way, AnecdoteClaims · 45 wordswhich is why we commissioned this study proving that northern Lac-Saint-Jean is under-represented when it comes to federal jobs.3Partly on point As for protecting Canada’s north, my dream is that the Quebec army and the Canadian army will one day conduct joint exercises to defend the Arctic.

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