“Mr. Speaker, my hon. colleague outlined a lot of the investments in defence that our government is making, but there are also job impacts and positive impacts for the economy. Could she talk a bit about how these defence investments may impact those?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 76 / 100
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Positioning 13%Claims 25%Anecdote 25%Promise 37%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordscertainly, when the government invests in defence, it invests in people.It invests in Canadians.PositioningClaims · 28 wordsI am sure that all of us can go out into our ridings and talk to different businesses that have a role to play in the defence sector.Anecdote · 29 wordsThere are many more in my riding than I even realized, now that I have been going out and talking about the great investments our government has been making.AnecdotePromise · 42 wordsI am confident that we are going to see a real, positive upswing in the number of people and businesses coming forward that are able to play a role in, contribute to and benefit from this great investment our government has made.Unearned certainty