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Kristina Tesser Derksen

83 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Burton Bailey (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, under international space law, Canada is the launching state and carries the full weight of legal and financial liability for any launch-related disasters. Why are Canadian taxpayers being forced to socialize the risk of a catastrophic failure, while the potential financial gains are privatized for the benefit of corporate lobbyists and shareholders?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 11%Claims 33%Reasoning 36%The ask 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordswhat a disappointment that question was from my colleague.Positioning Claims · 27 wordsToday, in the gallery, we had Colonel Jeremy Hansen, who is the pride of the Canadian Space Agency and the first Canadian to venture beyond the moon.12 Reasoning · 30 wordsThe investments we make in space and innovation to establish Canada’s role in this new and growing sector are absolutely critical and pivotal to making our place in the world. The ask · 17 wordsI hope all members in this chamber will support our astronauts and innovation in the space sector.Off point

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