Replying to Alexis Brunelle-Duceppe (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I mentioned a project earlier that we support. It involves setting up a reserve unit in the northern part of the Lac-Saint-Jean region. Right now, the Department of National Defence is looking to spend more money and recruit more people. If I pass the file on to my colleague, could she put in a good word for me and lend her support to the reserve unit project in Saint‑Félicien?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 50. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Signal.
30 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 70%Positioning 30%
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 42 wordsI am not sure how much clout I would have as a humble backbencher at this point, but I am certainly happy to explore any suggestions my hon. colleagues send over to me, Vague promiseand I’m happy to discuss them at any time.AsidePositioning · 18 wordsOur government is about collaboration and building Canada strong with the help of all members of this House.PositioningOff point