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Jonathan Rowe

136 words · 14 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we have to be proud of our history when we talk about aerospace, because, as my colleague highlighted, we were the fourth country to have a satellite, Alouette I, in 1962, and we were the people who built it. We built the lunar modules’ landing gear in Longueuil, Quebec. Six lunar modules are still up there, each resting on four legs that were made in Longueuil. We should be proud of Canada’s aerospace history and legacy. I would like my colleague’s opinion on the following. How is it that, this year, the federal government is unfortunately misspending $200 million on Canada’s aerospace industry?”
Statement grade
A
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 50%Positioning 6%Reasoning 29%Procedure 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordsI agree. Quebec especially has been a leader in the aerospace industry, with Bombardier’s building airplanes.1 It has been amazing, what we have done in Canada. Positioning · 8 wordsWe have so much to be proud of.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsAgain, I do not think the mistake is investing. I think the mistake is wasting that money. Claims · 42 wordsWe built a launch pad that is almost identical to the pictures I have seen and to what I have seen when I have been there.3 It is an almost identical launch pad, for 5% of the price, in Newfoundland and Labrador.2 Reasoning · 23 wordsThis is not about what we are spending money on. It is how you are wasting the money, giving it to Liberal insiders. Procedure · 20 wordsI apologize, Mr. Speaker. It was not you who wasted the money. It was the Liberals. I made a mistake.Procedure

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