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Gord Johns

368 words · 23 sentences · 27 clauses

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Greeting 7%Procedure 6%Claims 59%Thanks 21%Promise 5%The ask 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 24 wordsit is an honour and a privilege to be able to say a couple of kind words about my good friend from Beaches—East York.Greeting Procedure · 9 wordsI will start by saying that it is disappointing.Procedure Claims · 61 wordsIn the last few weeks, this is the third progressive member of Parliament from the government caucus who is leaving this place, especially at a time when we need progressive politics.1 I cannot think of another member of Parliament in the history of this country who has fought and worked more to end animal cruelty and stand up for animal rights. Thanks · 9 wordsIt has been a privilege to watch him work, ThanksPromise · 18 wordsand we all know we have to carry that work forward.Unearned certainty We will take his crusade with us.Vague promise Thanks · 16 wordsMy colleague from Calgary Nose Hill talked about courage, and I really want to emphasize that.Thanks Claims · 30 wordsHe stood with the NDP well before the supply and confidence agreement on pharmacare. I am disappointed that he does not get to see it exercised in his home province. The ask · 9 wordsI hope the government will take that to heart. Claims · 44 wordsHe stood with my bill, Bill C-216, on a health-based approach to tackle the toxic drug crisis.2 He was an outlier in his caucus and he stood with us to make sure that we had a plan to respond to the toxic drug crisis. Thanks · 8 wordsI want to thank him for his support.Thanks Procedure · 13 wordsI want to highlight one thing, which is his job as a minister.Procedure Claims · 83 wordsHe took it to heart when we asked for support for a pool upgrade in my riding. He understood the need for seniors to have a safe place to exercise and how it was community medicine. He constantly texted me, emailed me, phoned me and checked on the project. He worked so diligently. I was so taken aback by his persistence to try to get something done. It resulted in the single largest federal government investment in mid-Vancouver Island for a recreation facility.3 Thanks · 44 wordsMy community is grateful. I hope he will visit my community so that we can celebrate the incredible work he put into our project. I want to thank him for his work and courage, and I look forward to seeing what he does next.Thanks

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