Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Terry Sheehan

153 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 24 wordsI rise today to recognize a remarkable milestone for the Kiwanis Club of Sault Ste. Marie as it celebrates 100 years of awesome service.2Thanks Claims · 91 wordsSince its founding in 1926, the club has embodied the very best of volunteerism, generosity and community leadership.1 For a century, its members have dedicated countless hours to improving the lives of children and families through fundraising, literacy initiatives, scholarships, youth leadership programs and support for local organizations. Whether through the Kiwanis pancake breakfast, partnership with the Thrive Child Development Centre or care packages for vulnerable children, the club’s impact has been felt for generations. Its members have shown that lasting change is built through compassion, inclusion and service above self. Thanks · 38 wordsI extend sincere congratulations to all past and present members of the Kiwanis Club of Sault Ste. Marie as it begins its second century of service. I know that it will be just as inspiring as the first.Thanks

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