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Marilène Gill

163 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 125 wordsvisitors strolling through the Parc des pionniers in Baie-Comeau will see a 1,150-foot-long snake winding its way across, made up of some 34,000 rocks painted by people from around the world, like a fantastical creature emerging from the nearby sea.1 This immense creature sprang from the genius of a young boy, Hugo Jobin. At eight years old, when leukemia was threatening his childhood, Hugo chose to bring his rock snake to life, 3because he decided then that he would beat not only leukemia, but also a Guinness world record. Two years later, Hugo has beaten cancer and has already beaten every possible record for love and solidarity, alongside an entire community and, of course, his parents, Mélanie and Nicolas, 4as well as his little sister. Thanks · 18 wordsI want to thank Hugo for showing us that the act of creating gives us even greater strength.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsHe is 10 years old today.2 The Bloc Québécois is celebrating life with him and, soon, his Guinness world record.

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