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Mark Carney

84 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Oh, Mr. Speaker, he is transforming the economy. He has transformed it into the only recession in the G20. Regretfully, this year there has been a net loss of 24,000 jobs, meaning that we have the second-highest unemployment in the G7, a third higher than in the United States. Today, Equifax said that “Canadian entrepreneurship is on the decline and business payment challenges continued to build as more companies fell behind on [their] payments”. A third fewer small businesses launched in the last 24 months. Current businesses are going bankrupt. New ones are not launching. Will he reverse course before more go bankrupt?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 33%Procedure 6%Claims 61%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordswhat matters is that people believe in this economy and are moving forward.Partly on point The Leader of the Opposition does not believe in Canada.PositioningOff point Procedure · 5 wordsThis is what is happening.Procedure Claims · 51 wordsMore Canadians are in the workforce than the Americans.1 More Canadian women are in the workforce than the Americans by seven percentage points.2 Investment in machinery and equipment by businesses is up 10%.3 We have the highest level of foreign direct investment in 20 years.4 A trade surplus was just registered.5 Positioning · 5 wordsWe are building Canada strong.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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