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Steven MacKinnon

93 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, did he say 15 years? This thing will not even be under construction for 15 years. In the meantime, Liberal insiders and sleazebags will be stuffing their pockets with the tax dollars of Canadian electricians. Already, 13 vice-presidents have received $2.3 million in bonuses for a train that will not even be under construction for over a decade. If it ever comes under construction, it will cost $8,000 a family. Why does he always plunder the pockets of workers to help the Liberal insider elites?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
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Positioning 47%Claims 53%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 33 wordsthe core difference between the people on this side of the House and the Leader of the Opposition and the people who read his questions is that we believe Canadians can do it.Positioning Claims · 49 wordsWe believe Canadians can create a project that will add 51,000 jobs to our economy, including thousands of electricians.1 We believe we can add billions to our national economy with a transformative high-speed rail project.2 This includes, by the way, one that is going to be proposed in Alberta.3 Positioning · 11 wordsWe believe in the future of this country. He does not.PositioningPartly on point

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