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Nathalie Provost

87 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Patrick Bonin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, one week after 300 mayors, civil society is now speaking out against the Liberals’ pro-oil stance. One hundred and twenty-two environmental groups, including 49 from Quebec, signed a letter today. They are here with a clear message: no new pipelines. They are saying no to any project that threatens the climate, endangered species, indigenous relations or the sovereignty of governments. It would be a betrayal of all Canadians who still believe in the fight against climate change. Will the Prime Minister end his pro-oil and gas stance?”
Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 10%Thanks 18%Reasoning 15%Claims 32%Promise 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsmy colleague is asking us a really important question.PositioningPartly on point Thanks · 16 wordsI commend all the activists who, like us, are fighting for clean air and clean water.Thanks Reasoning · 13 wordsHowever, it is also fundamental for us to be an autonomous economic power. Claims · 11 wordsThat is why we are working on several fronts at once.Vague promise Promise · 9 wordsWe will work to meet our 2050 climate commitments.Vague promise Claims · 17 wordsThe methane regulations, the electrification strategy and the nature action plan are all strategies to get there.1 Promise · 12 wordsWhat we are going to do is produce cleaner and cleaner energy.Vague promise

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