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Steven MacKinnon

104 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jason Groleau (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, over the past few days, we have met with dozens of businesses across Quebec regarding the CUSMA review. The situation is clear: This Liberal government has completely abandoned businesses in the steel industry. The United States is protecting its steel market with tariffs of up to 100% on Asian imports. What are the Liberals doing here in Canada? They are doing nothing at all. Worse still, they are letting Asian countries dump their steel products here and flood our Canadian market. Will this Liberal government put its foot down and defend the Canadian steel industry?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 100%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 104 wordsit is funny to be sitting here listening to the Conservatives talk about SMEs when they are against the high-speed rail project that will create thousands of jobs in SMEs across Quebec.Off point It is funny to hear them talk about steel when we are planning a project that is incredibly promising for steel producers.Partly on pointVague promise It is mind-boggling to hear the Conservatives taking a stand against a transformative project that will improve mobility, connect the four biggest cities in Quebec and create thousands of jobs for our SMEs.1 It is quite ironic that they are standing up to talk about what our SMEs are experiencing.PositioningOff point

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