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Mélanie Joly

103 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jason Groleau (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, there is nothing funny about it. As I said, the Liberals are allowing Asian countries to dump their steel here. Garaga, a company in the Beauce region, sent emails to the Liberal government with evidence that non-compliant garage doors from Asia containing toxic substances banned in Canada are entering the country. What have the Liberals done about it? They have not done a thing yet. They are letting them come in. Garaga just has to fend for itself. After a decade of failures, the only thing this Liberal government has managed to do is put Canadians in debt and hurt our businesses. Will the Liberals wake up and take care of our people?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Positioning 15%Claims 53%Promise 32%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordswe are taking care of our people.Vague promise That is why Quebeckers and Canadians trust us.PositioningOff point Claims · 40 wordsThe Prime Minister, the Minister of Finance, the Minister responsible for Canada-U.S. Trade and I work every day to protect people in the steel sector. Among other things, we have protected the steel sector by preventing all forms of dumping.1 Promise · 33 wordsIf my colleague wishes to raise a particular issue, we are ready to work with him and with all steel producers in Canada because we have to protect our factories and steel mills.Partly on pointVague promise Claims · 15 wordsAt the same time, we are providing funding to help our workers and our businesses.2

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