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Buckley Belanger

69 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kevin Waugh (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under this Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in recession. The economy has shrunk three of the last four quarters. The Liberals are already borrowing over their projected $65 billion. The Parliamentary Budget Officer projects borrowing now to climb to $72 billion. Will the Prime Minister tell Canadians if they are in a recession or are they only technically doing worse after a decade of Liberal rule?”
Statement grade
F
37 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 48%Claims 28%Thanks 25%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 26 wordsthere is a decade of 14 Saskatchewan Conservatives doing absolutely nothing to further Saskatchewan’s interests.2 On this side of the House, we are building an economy.PositioningVague promise Claims · 11 wordsWe are proud of the entrepreneurs who created 88,000 new jobs.1Off point Thanks · 17 wordsWe are grateful for the investors. We are pleased to see the producers add to that strength: ThanksClaims · 8 wordsSaskatchewan canola, Canada’s uranium, potash, oil and gas.Off point Positioning · 7 wordsWe are not sitting on our hands—PositioningPartly on pointVague promise

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