“Mr. Speaker, the government granted a visa to a former IRGC commander who arrived at Toronto Pearson airport on April 28 to attend the FIFA World Cup. The government also failed to deport an Iranian regime supporter who has been convicted of sanctions violations and has been here so long that he is suing the government. The government has said for a year that dozens of senior Iranian officials are here, but exactly one has been deported, as was previously mentioned. When will the government treat foreign interference threats seriously and protect our Persian community?”
Statement grade
D
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 67. The grade is held to 49, 30 above Relevance.
49 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 13%Claims 28%The ask 59%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 13 wordsthe safety and security of all Canadians is critically important to this government.PositioningClaims · 27 wordsThat is why we are taking decisive action to ensure security at the border, including ensuring that those who are inadmissible to Canada are not allowed in.Partly on pointVague promiseThe ask · 58 wordsIf the Conservative Party wants to talk seriously about crime and law enforcement, they need to get serious on Bill C-22, which is a lawful access act before the House.1Instead of stonewalling and dragging their feet on critically important legislation, they should support it today so that we can get this through the House before we rise.Off point