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Heath MacDonald

77 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Jeremy Patzer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I heard from several farmers and local media that test plots at Canada’s only federal organic research station at Swift Current were ploughed under and receded, destroying years of valuable research. The minister will probably stand up and say, “this is just a usual organics process” and “ignore the data loss,” but really, this is the Liberals’ weak attempt at responding to the massive push-back from farmers and industry. The Liberal agriculture minister said that shutting federal research centres was worthwhile, but organic farming in Canada is an $11-billion industry and growing. Does the minister really want his legacy to be destroying organic research in Canada?”
Statement grade
A–
Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 29%Claims 51%Reasoning 8%Promise 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsI think the hon. member across the way knows exactly what took place at the research station relevant to the organic growth.Positioning Claims · 22 wordsThey are plowing the fields and working the land, as they do every other year, 3and they will continue to do that. Reasoning · 6 wordsResearch is important in this country. Claims · 17 wordsWe have been doing it for 140 years.1 We have over 17 stations that will remain open, 2Promise · 10 wordsand we will continue to grow our research in Canada.Vague promise

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