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Kevin Lamoureux

130 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Dan Muys (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we know that the Alto high‑speed rail project, which will be completed toward the end of the next decade, 2040, already has 13 vice‑presidents at that agency who are already receiving bonuses, with not an inch of track being laid. The hon. member described Build Canada Homes as an arm’s-length federal agency. How many vice‑presidents will there be, and are they going to be receiving bonuses already?”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 20%Positioning 12%Claims 68%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI can appreciate the question, I guess, to a certain degree.Procedure Positioning · 4 wordsIt is completely off‑topic.Positioning Claims · 88 wordsHowever, when we take a look at what is being proposed and what the government is pushing as a major project, working with the Province of Quebec in a collaborative fashion, this is a project that has received support from Progressive Conservatives. It has also received support from Conservatives.1 The member will find that, in previous governments, under the Harper regime, there were members of Parliament in the Conservative caucus who actually supported the project and who were in opposition to what today’s far-right Conservative Party is saying.2 Positioning · 12 wordsThe Conservatives are trying to portray something that is not the case.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 15 wordsHopefully, we will hear a lot more on this project in the days to come.Procedure

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