“Mr. Speaker, I recognize that there are very serious concerns and issues surrounding our forest industry in Canada. The government, through its buy Canada policy and other initiatives, is doing what it can to support it. The question I have for the member is in regard to the legislation itself. The Build Canada Homes act would allow the Government of Canada, at an arm’s-length distance, to work collaboratively with the different governments. It has been very successful with the Government of Quebec, with the agreement. I wonder if the member could just provide his perspective on why it is important to have the legislation go through and to work collaboratively with the different stakeholders.”
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 58. The grade is held to 33, 30 above Relevance.
33 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsas I said earlier, I am in collaboration mode, ProcedureClaims · 7 wordsbut I am not seeing any results.Partly on pointVague promisePositioning · 11 wordsI sometimes wonder about the government’s interest in the forestry industry.PositioningClaims · 40 wordsWhat struck me the most about the “Canada Strong for All” fiscal update is that the words “forest” and “forestry” appear only nine times.1However, a search for the words “oil” or “oil company” shows that they appear 130 times.2Positioning · 22 words“Canada for all” seems to be Canada focused on western Canada’s energy sector.It is not Canada focused on the forestry sector.PositioningReasoning · 27 wordsAs we know, politics is a balance of power, and unfortunately, when it comes down to the forestry industry, right now our balance of power is non‑existent.Off pointUnearned certainty