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Charles Sousa

77 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kelly McCauley (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I take great offence at the member’s calling me “moderate” as chair. It hurts me to my soul. One of the Liberals’ campaign promises was that they would cut municipal development charges in half. In Alberta, B.C. and across the country, this has not happened. Why has the Liberal government broken its promise again?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 10%Claims 31%Procedure 5%Reasoning 6%The ask 47%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 8 wordsthe member is moderate, except on this question.Aside Claims · 24 wordsThe fact of the matter is that we are reducing costs and working with other provinces.Vague promiseUnearned certainty Ontario has actually matched some of those cuts, 1Procedure · 4 wordsand that is important.Procedure Reasoning · 5 wordsWe have to work collaboratively. The ask · 36 wordsI reach out to the members of the opposition to come on board to help their citizens and constituents lower their cost of housing. Let us join together to make housing more affordable right across Canada.Partly on point

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