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Larry Brock

90 words · 3 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Andréanne Larouche (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my colleague for his speech. I know that he has taken an interest in the issue of women’s safety. He even participated in a few meetings of the Standing Committee on the Status of Women. Bill C‑16 incorporates many of the recommendations made by the Standing Committee on the Status of Women. These recommendations are based on requests from survivors and victims, particularly with regard to court delays and the criminalization of coercive control. The Standing Committee on the Status of Women made these recommendations and they have been incorporated into Bill C‑16. Did he discuss this with his Conservative colleagues?”
Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 11%Positioning 8%Claims 70%The ask 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI am not sure if I heard a question there, ProcedurePositioning · 7 wordsbut I wholeheartedly agree with my colleague.Positioning Claims · 63 wordsThere are definite enhancements when it comes to victim safety and victim procedure in Bill C‑16, which is why I said at the outset that 99% of the bill is supportable. We would be very supportive of splitting the bill and having the good parts, that 99%, pass into the Senate, but split off that poisonous safety valve consideration in proposed section 63, 1The ask · 10 wordswhich is what we would like to have taken off.Partly on point

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