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Gabriel Hardy

149 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the reality is that through Bill C-16, we would see the reinstatement of a number of mandatory minimums that were actually ruled out of order with respect to Canada’s Charter of Rights. As a result, Bill C-16 would reinstate many of those mandatory minimums. It puts in the exceptional circumstances clause in order to protect the integrity of the laws so that they would not continue to be ruled as being against the charter. In other words, it would make them charter-compliant. It seems to me that the Conservative Party is just trying to find an excuse to justify its position.”
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Average 88 / 100
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Claims 30%Positioning 32%Reasoning 38%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsthis is a perfect example of what I was talking about in my speech.Partly on point Positioning · 30 wordsWhen these people talk about rights and freedoms, they are talking about the rights and freedoms of criminals. What about the rights of victims? Where are they? Victims are afraid, PositioningClaims · 6 wordsand the crime rate is rising.1 Positioning · 5 wordsWhat message is being sent?Positioning Claims · 24 wordsWe are leaving another loophole to allow violent criminals to get off scot-free and to give judges the option not to impose minimum sentences.2 Positioning · 8 wordsNo, that is not what our country needs.Positioning Reasoning · 57 wordsWe need a strong justice system that makes it clear to criminals what consequences they will face if they commit a crime. The system must not give them free rein by suggesting that, in the end, they might be able to spend the rest of their lives at home while victims are forced to live in fear. Positioning · 5 wordsThat is a terrible message.Positioning

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