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Marie-Hélène Gaudreau

82 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Stephanie Kusie (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I was really disappointed to hear, this evening, that Bill C‑9 passed thanks to a deal between the government and the Bloc Québécois. In my view, that is not fair. That is not really how we should be making laws. I want to know whether my colleague thinks that this is really how she wants laws to be created here, that is, with deals, agreements and bartering, instead of being transparent with Canadians.”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 7%Positioning 78%Aside 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordsI was just talking about partisanship.Procedure Positioning · 28 wordsPartisanship has its limits. Not agreeing with a decision or voting nay is one thing. In my opinion, however, using social media as an election platform is unacceptable.Positioning Aside · 12 wordsI do not even want to know how much money was raised.Aside Positioning · 36 wordsUltimately, what this shows is a lack of seriousness. We may think of ourselves as seasoned parliamentarians representing our constituents, but I am sorry, people are forgetting the essence of what it is to be human.PositioningOff point

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