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Ned Kuruc

130 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Gord Johns (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate the opportunity to speak to this bill. Before I get started, I want to give a shout-out to Laurel Collins, the former MP for Victoria, who, as you might recall, was a champion in tackling gender-based violence and laid the groundwork for today. If Bill C-16 is about protecting women and children, we need to get it right. We need to listen to the experts, and many of them, including women’s organizations, survivor groups and legal advocates, have repeatedly called for greater investments in prevention, housing, income security and violence protection programs, yet we have seen Liberals and Conservatives continually vote against amendments that we put forward, especially from the member for Winnipeg Centre. Maybe my colleague can speak about why the Conservatives voted against those amendments instead of focusing on stopping violence before it happens, because that is a critical component.”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
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Thanks 5%Procedure 5%Claims 40%Positioning 22%Anecdote 15%The ask 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 7 wordsI thank my colleague for the question, ThanksProcedure · 6 wordsbut I want to be clear.Procedure Claims · 7 wordsConservatives want mandatory minimums for heinous crimes.1 Positioning · 29 wordsFor criminals who attack women and children, we do not want a “get out of jail free” card. We are tough on crime. That is what I believe in.Positioning Anecdote · 19 wordsIt is why I was elected and why I wanted to become a politician. I wanted to make change.Anecdote Claims · 45 wordsI also want to make sure that when criminals get to court, they get a mandatory minimum for sexually abusing children and for violence against women.2 We should not have a clause that would allow the judge to see otherwise. That is what Conservatives want, 3The ask · 17 wordsand if the Liberals could just work with us on this, this would be a good bill.Partly on point

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