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Emma Harrison

137 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Stephanie McLean (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, we know that 76% of appellate-level challenges to Harper-era mandatory minimum sentences were successful. We also know that the Conservatives are saying that they will not support this bill without the addition of mandatory minimum sentences, but more than 217 challenges to the constitutionality of these since 2021 have been made. When the courts frequently strike down mandatory minimum sentences, why do members think the Conservatives want the government to include clauses that would weaken the legislation, increase the likelihood of it being struck down, and take up precious court time and costs on unconstitutional clauses? What do you think their real reason is for—”
Statement grade
B
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 12%Claims 63%Positioning 3%The ask 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 17 wordsmy colleague did a beautiful job of painting the picture of what is really going on here.Thanks Claims · 56 wordsI would like to take a moment to speak as a survivor of domestic violence and how critically important this legislation is. It is hard to truly put into words how challenging it is to navigate a justice system after having been a victim of crime. This bill would address that. It would address coercive control, 1Positioning · 4 wordswhich is incredibly important.Positioning Claims · 30 wordsIt is very hard to understand what it is like for victims of intimate partner violence and what they go through for years on end. This bill would address that. The ask · 30 wordsI would like for the Conservatives to understand, get out of the way, as they like to say, support this bill for victims and show survivors that we are listening.Partly on point

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