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Mike Dawson

136 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

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Greeting 23%Claims 8%Thanks 69%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 31 wordsit is a great pleasure for me to welcome back to Ottawa today a very special guest and a dear friend, the former member of Parliament for Miramichi, Tilly O’Neill Gordon.Greeting Claims · 11 wordsBefore politics, Tilly spent her career as an elementary school teacher.1 Thanks · 94 wordsWe continue to learn from her today. Whether she is in the House or back home in our riding, she treats everyone with warmth, respect and kindness. Tilly is in Ottawa this week, reconnecting with colleagues and friends. She remains loved by her friends at home and here in Ottawa. On behalf of all members, especially those who had the pleasure of serving with her, welcome back, Tilly. I thank her for her service to Miramichi—Grand Lake and for always showing us what the real public service looks like to the people back home.Thanks

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