Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Michael Guglielmin

169 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

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Claims 64%Reasoning 22%Thanks 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 109 wordsin 1952, a courageous 21-year-old woman left her small town in Treviso, Italy, with her father by her side.1 They boarded a train bound for Genoa. From there, alone, she stepped onto a ship and began that now famous journey across the Atlantic, arriving at Pier 21 in Halifax.2 She came to Canada alone, speaking no English and carrying little more than hope. That young woman was my grandmother, Olga Guglielmin, who celebrated her 94th birthday this year.3 Like so many Italian Canadians, Nonna Olga came in search of a dream. It was the dream of family, opportunity and a better life than the one she had left behind. Reasoning · 38 wordsShe taught us that the greatest riches in life are not measured in dollars, but in relationships. Around her table, with a simple tablecloth, good food, candlelight and loved ones gathered close, she showed us what truly mattered. Thanks · 22 wordsThis Italian Heritage Month, I honour all Italian-Canadian nonni, especially my Nonna Olga, whose courage, integrity and love continue to guide us.Thanks

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