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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordsI rise today to extend my deepest condolences to the Bali family, whose son, Ontario Provincial Police constable Tarun Bali, was killed in the line of duty yesterday in northern Ontario.2ThanksClaims · 53 wordsConstable Bali had served on the force for two years, dedicating his life to the safety and protection of others.1He served his community with courage, pride and a deep sense of duty.He was a well-respected member of the police service and carried out his responsibilities each day with the utmost integrity.Thanks · 59 wordsConstable Bali’s courage and sacrifice will not be forgotten.His ultimate sacrifice in the service of protecting others will forever be honoured and appreciated by his community, his colleagues and all those whose lives he touched.Let us take this moment to recognize Constable Bali’s legacy as one of courage, service and pride.May his soul rest in peace.Thanks