“Mr. Speaker, hundreds of farmers from Mirabel braved the rain today on Parliament Hill. They came to tell the Liberals that they are not happy with Alto’s high‑speed train project in its current form. It is too bad that the minister did not come out to meet with them. He could have answered all the questions that Alto has been refusing to answer since January. If the Liberals think they are going to be able to forcibly expropriate land in Mirabel yet again, our farmers proved today that they have another think coming. Will the government finally respect our farmers, meet with them and answer their questions?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 32%Claims 32%Promise 25%Reasoning 10%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsI want to reassure the member that I do not need his help to meet with farmers.PositioningClaims · 18 wordsI come from a farming family myself.1I visit farmers often.I talk to farmers all the time.Promise · 26 wordsIt is out of this respect for the agricultural community that we will carry out this project with the highest regard for the concerns of farmers.Vague promiseClaims · 16 wordsIt is unfortunate that the Bloc Québécois is now breaking its promise to support this project.2Positioning · 17 wordsI do not know what the Bloc members were thinking.Did they think these trains would fly?PositioningReasoning · 11 wordsTrains run on tracks that have to be on the ground.Off point