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Joël Lightbound

99 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jacques Gourde (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, hundreds of people gathered on Parliament Hill today to make their voices heard about the Alto train, which is threatening the survival of our communities. These people included many farmers facing the prospect of not being able to cross their land because of the Liberal government’s threat to split it in two. I have not met a single farmer who wants a high‑speed train cutting across their land. Will the Prime Minister listen to the farmers and stop work on this project, which is totally off track?”
Statement grade
C
Average 62 / 100
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Positioning 65%Promise 15%Claims 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 7 wordswe have the utmost respect for farmers, PositioningPromise · 15 wordsand we want to work with them to find a middle ground on this project.Vague promise Positioning · 22 wordsWhat saddens me is seeing the Conservatives try to keep us decades behind the times at every turn and with each project.PositioningOff point Claims · 20 wordsIn Europe, especially in France, Spain and the United Kingdom, high‑speed trains exist alongside agricultural activities and cross through fields.1 Positioning · 35 wordsI think that we, in Canada, are just as capable of doing things well and building infrastructure that will revolutionize and transform this country.Unearned certainty It would be nice if the Conservatives could get on board.PositioningOff point

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