“Mr. Speaker, I think the Secretary of State for Nature did not understand what I said in my first question. Sixty per cent of Canadians are feeling anxious, and 38% of Canadians are experiencing food insecurity. The government wants to embark on a high-speed rail project costing over $100 billion while people are going hungry. How can anyone think that these people can afford a ticket to ride the high-speed train when they cannot even afford groceries? Can she answer that?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordswith respect to the challenges Canadians are currently facing, the Canada groceries and essentials benefit payments were sent out on Friday.1Positioning · 8 wordsWe are fully aware of the current situation.PositioningProcedure · 1 wordsHowever, ProcedureReasoning · 21 wordsif we really want to turn things around, we need to invest and give ourselves a way to do things differently, Vague promiseClaims · 33 wordsand that is exactly what we are doing.Partly on pointVague promiseWe are helping Canadians put food on the table, and they are seeing the results, but we are also helping Canadians in the long term.Partly on point