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Eleanor Olszewski

77 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Jagsharan Singh Mahal (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, under the Liberal Prime Minister, Canada is the only G20 country in a recession. In Edmonton, families are feeling the effects of Liberal mismanagement. A recent United Way survey found that 60% of Canadians now feel anxiety about their personal finances. Global factors are not to blame. It is Liberal inflationary spending and antidevelopment laws that have staled our economy. Canadians deserve better. Will the Prime Minister reverse his costly policies causing this crisis so Canadians can afford to live again?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 66 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 29%Claims 23%Promise 30%Procedure 6%The question 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsour government has a clear plan to build Canada strong by creating good careers for workers in Alberta and across the country.PositioningVague promise Claims · 18 wordsLast month, 14,000 new jobs were added to Alberta’s economy.1 We know there is more work to do. Promise · 23 wordsThat is why we are building big and scaling up efforts to recruit, train and hire up to 100,000 additional skilled trade workers.2Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsI have a simple question: ProcedureThe question · 9 wordsWhy are the Conservatives so disappointed by positive news?Off point

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