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Blake Richards

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 93 wordson June 12, Filipinos worldwide celebrate Philippine Independence Day.1 As we celebrate, we recognize the rich history, culture and enduring spirit. Filipino Canadians have made remarkable contributions in every field, from health care and education to business, the public service and the arts, and certainly to charitable initiatives, helping to strengthen and enrich our country. At the same time, we acknowledge the grief that many are experiencing following this week’s devastating earthquake in Mindanao.2 Our prayers are with those who have been affected, and we stand in solidarity with those mourning and rebuilding. Anecdote · 30 wordsBeing married to a Filipina myself, I have seen first hand the values of hard work, resilience and commitment to family and community that define Filipino culture and enrich Canada.3Anecdote Reasoning · 22 wordsThe day also reminds us of the value of freedom that inspired the Philippines’ independence movement and continues to inspire people everywhere. Thanks · 25 wordsOn behalf of Canada’s Conservatives, I wish all Filipinos a happy independence day, and I look forward to joining in tomorrow’s celebrations. Maraming Salamat. Mabuhay.Thanks

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