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Dan Muys

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 97 wordslast Friday, Waterdown, Ontario, celebrated its annual “remember everyone deployed Friday”, better known as RED Friday, 1which was hosted by the Royal Canadian Legion Branch 551 in the core of Waterdown.2 On RED Friday, we wore red to show appreciation for veterans, active military and first responders and their families. This year, Waterdown saw a record crowd, with live music, activities and displays featuring first responder and military vehicles.3 The Waterdown Museum of Hope was also open.4 The museum hosts some amazing displays, showcasing Canadian heroes and peacekeepers, narrated by students from the Waterdown District High School.5 Thanks · 52 wordsThe event would not have been possible without the leadership of Sheila Latner, president of the Waterdown Legion, 6and event co-hosts Bob Thomas and Judi Partridge.7 I thank all who have served our country and all who continue to serve for their service. I thank them for keeping Canada strong and free.Thanks

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