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Serge Cormier

170 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordstoday I would like to pay tribute to a true hero from my region, Corporal Sylvain Bergeron of the Lamèque RCMP detachment.Greeting Claims · 76 wordsOn June 2, in Chiasson Office, a teenage girl in severe distress entered the icy, choppy waters and was found more than 100 feet from shore.1 Upon arriving at the scene, Corporal Bergeron realized she was in imminent danger. Without a moment’s hesitation, he jumped into the water to rescue her.2 Risking his own safety, he swam out to her, kept her from drowning and brought her safely back to shore, despite the extremely difficult conditions. Thanks · 72 wordsSometimes, in the darkest moments, there are people who choose to act with remarkable composure. On that day, Corporal Bergeron embodied the best of what public service represents: dedication, compassion and courage. On behalf of all the citizens of Acadie—Bathurst and the members of the House of Commons, I extend to him our most sincere thanks, our deep gratitude and our utmost admiration. I also wish the young lady a speedy recovery.Thanks

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