Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 12%Claims 32%Promise 43%Aside 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 20 wordsI rise to celebrate the fathers, grandfathers and father figures in our lives and the importance of men’s mental health.ProcedureClaims · 23 wordsJune is Men’s Health Month, a time dedicated to raising awareness, promoting prevention and improving the health and well-being of men and boys.1Promise · 32 wordsTo support this initiative, I will be hosting and playing in our third annual Dodge for Dads dodge ball tournament in support of mental health on the Friday of Father’s Day weekend, 2Aside · 10 wordsbecause there is no dodging the importance of mental health.AsidePromise · 18 wordsFor this fun evening of physical activity and team-building, I will be partnering with The Well Community Collective, Claims · 29 wordswhich is one of several wellness hubs across the Perth, Huron and Wellington counties that connect families and individuals with the resources, advocacy and safe spaces that they need.3Promise · 20 wordsI am looking forward to getting out and throwing around a few dodge balls in support of men’s mental health, Aside · 12 wordsbecause if someone can dodge a wrench, they can dodge a ball.Aside