“Mr. Speaker, this morning, I am sure every member of this House was devastated to learn of the Toronto police officer who was shot and killed in the line of duty. We grieve alongside the family, friends and colleagues of Constable Marc Pinizzotto, an 18-year veteran of the force who served his city with courage and devotion until his very final moments. To his loved ones and the men and women in uniform right across this country who put their lives on the line every single day, our gratitude is beyond measure. In the wake of this tragic loss, will the Minister of Public Safety please update the House on the government’s response?”
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D
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 66. The grade is held to 46, 30 above Signal.
46 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 83%Claims 17%
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordsI am heartbroken in hearing of the passing of Officer Marc Pinizzotto.ThanksClaims · 22 wordsI was able to connect with the Toronto Police chief, the Toronto Police Association and the mayor of the city of Toronto, Partly on pointThanks · 92 wordsand I express our profound grief and condolences to the people of Toronto and all those who serve on the front lines.Today is a day for all of us to come together and cherish those who serve us each and every day, risking their lives.To the families who sacrifice every day and hope that their family member will come home, I pray for them.I pray for all those in law enforcement and pray that Constable Pinizzotto’s family have the peace they need to get through this very difficult time.Thanks
