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Steven MacKinnon

75 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jasraj Hallan (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister stuffed his face with $17,000 of salmon on just three taxpayer-funded flights. That is as much as a family will spend— Some hon. members: Oh, oh! Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister spent 17,000 dollars’ worth of salmon on just three taxpayer-funded flights. That is as much as a family will spend on groceries for the entire year. While sending 2.2 million Canadians to a food bank every single month, is it fair that he stuffed his face with $94,000 of catering on just one flight to Rome, when that is how much five families spend on groceries for the entire year?”
Statement grade
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30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 91%Claims 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 57 wordson a day when we are mourning the loss of a first responder, people should really wonder, 1as they look on the House of Commons, why folks look down on some of the antics here, when we follow up such a constructive exchange with something penned quite obviously from the desk of the Leader of the Opposition.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 7 wordsI expect 30 more of those today. Positioning · 11 wordsLet us just hope they can up their game a bit.PositioningOff point

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