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Steven MacKinnon

89 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, when the Prime Minister left his job as the chair of Brookfield in New York to come to Canada, he forgot that he was no longer working for a private company but for Canadian taxpayers. Right now, Canadians are going through a recession. They are paying more for everything, and millions are struggling to make ends meet. Meanwhile, government documents show that the Prime Minister spent nearly $1 million on inflight catering for just 14 trips. While families have to watch every penny they spend at the grocery store, does the Prime Minister really think that spending $1 million on inflight meals is a responsible use of taxpayers’ money?”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 73%Claims 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsCanadians watch the proceedings of the House, and I do not think that they appreciate that accusatory tone.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsCanadians know full well that we are in the midst of intense trade negotiations.2Unearned certainty There are wars in Europe and in the Middle East.1 Positioning · 47 wordsThe Prime Minister proudly represents us. He is bringing back agreements, investments and opportunities for Canadians across the country.Partly on point We are proud of our Prime Minister. We are proud of the efforts that he is making on the international stage, and I hope he will keep going.PositioningOff point

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