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Steven MacKinnon

95 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister sacrificed the future of francophone culture at the hands of Donald Trump. He is completely giving up on the 10-year struggle to get American web giants to help fund creative works and news. What has he gotten in return? All he has gotten is yet another escalation of hostilities from Washington. After seeing Canada surrender on the culture issue, President Trump responded yesterday by saying that he is not looking to renew CUSMA. Does the Prime Minister realize that he sacrificed culture for nothing?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 15%Positioning 21%Claims 52%The ask 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsmy colleague, the Minister of Canadian Identity and Culture, will respond in a moment, ProcedurePositioning · 13 wordsbut we should reflect on how the Bloc Québécois has lost its way.Positioning Claims · 49 wordsTwo weeks ago, OUI Québec—the “yes” camp, not the “no” camp—basically accused the sovereignist movement of being intolerant.1 Mr. de Belleval, who is a former PQ transport minister, put it nicely when he said that the Bloc Québécois is now also giving up on its transportation hopes and dreams.2 The ask · 12 wordsI hope that the member for Repentigny will set the record straight, Positioning · 7 wordsbut for now, we are taking note.PositioningOff point

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