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Patty Hajdu

75 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jessica Fancy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, mining is already one of Canada’s largest economic drivers, contributing billions of dollars to the Canadian economy annually, but the sector is experiencing a labour shortage right now, needing 250,000 new hires over the next 10 years. Can the Minister of Jobs and Families please update the House on a national announcement that was recently held in my riding of South Shore—St. Margarets about what is being done to ensure that Canadian workers can take advantage of these generational opportunities?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 41%Claims 49%Positioning 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordsI thank the member for her hard work and her advocacy to bring the mining industry together to ensure we have the skills that we need for today and for tomorrow.Thanks Claims · 37 wordsYes, this alliance is launched with great fanfare from the industry, 1which is praising the Government of Canada for taking action to make sure that the skills that are taught are aligned with what the industry needs.2Vague promise Positioning · 7 wordsThis is how we build Canada strong.Positioning

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