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Steven MacKinnon

136 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Alexis Deschênes (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I am going to take advantage of the fact that the minister responsible for democratic institutions is here to get his perspective on something that happened in the National Assembly. Yesterday, they passed a bill to protect certain electoral districts. As we are well aware, each time a redistribution happens, we try to reconcile— Mr. Speaker, yesterday, the National Assembly of Quebec passed a law to protect certain ridings in my region, the Gaspé Peninsula, as well as one in Montreal. With every electoral redistribution exercise comes tension between, on the one hand, population growth and the need to ensure that each vote carries similar relative weight, and, on the other hand, the importance of ensuring that ridings do not become too large. The Quebec National Assembly chose to protect certain ridings. Similar situations exist at the federal level. My riding, Gaspésie—Les Îles-de-la-Madeleine—Listuguj, now covers 23,000 square kilometres. That is larger than the area of Djibouti. Several of my colleagues have even larger ridings. What does my colleague think we can do to better balance these two requirements?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
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Aside 16%Claims 26%Thanks 22%Reasoning 35%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 22 wordsI want to repeat to the member for Gaspésie—Les Îles-de-la-Madeleine—Listuguj that he too must be looking forward to returning to his riding.Aside Claims · 8 wordsHe does indeed represent a very large riding. Thanks · 23 wordsI admire all members, all elected officials, who drive long distances, often very late, and in all kinds of conditions, including winter conditions.Thanks Claims · 28 wordsIt is obviously very challenging to represent people who are spread across a vast area and who, in his case, are separated by the Gulf of St. Lawrence. Thanks · 7 wordsI really commend my colleague for that.Thanks Reasoning · 48 wordsThat said, in a democracy, we must do everything in our power to ensure that every vote carries equal weight, whether it is cast in Montreal or in Percé.Vague promise We always try to respect that fundamental principle, one that is actually recognized by the Supreme Court of Canada.1Partly on point

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