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Steven MacKinnon

91 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Yves Perron (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, before I begin, I want to note that the Bloc Québécois members share all the sentiments that have been expressed today regarding the police officers who lost their lives in Ontario. I think that is important. I also want to acknowledge my dear friend Normand Branchaud, who is celebrating 60 years as a musician this weekend. He is an extraordinary individual who bought his first harmonica with three and a half dollars that he earned by running errands. I congratulate him. I have a question for my colleague. Is music a big part of his life?”
Statement grade
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59 / 100, held down by Signal
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Aside 59%Thanks 10%Claims 31%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 29 wordsfirst, I would like to invite Mr. Branchaud to come to Gatineau to entertain us at one of our many festivals this summer, including the hot air balloon festival.1Aside Thanks · 9 wordsI want to wish Mr. Branchaud a happy anniversary.Thanks Aside · 8 wordsI would love to hear him play someday.Aside Claims · 28 wordsMusic is an essential part of my life. Whether we are talking about Québécois music, francophone music or music in general, I am a big fan of music, Aside · 17 wordsand I would be happy to talk about it with the Bloc Québécois whip at some point.Aside

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