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Steven MacKinnon

141 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Yves Perron (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, this time I will ask my colleague a question that relates to the topic at hand. That said, I really liked his previous answer, which I am sure will be greatly appreciated. My colleague referred earlier to the vote we took during the previous Parliament to maintain Quebec’s political representation at 78 ridings. We know that the demographic weight of the Quebec nation will continue to decline in the federal Parliament. There are groups currently putting pressure on the government to introduce some form of proportional representation in the electoral process. There is the issue of multiple candidates. Bill C-25 directly addresses the issue. Does my colleague think that, because the Constitution cannot be amended in Canada, it would be realistic at some point to embark on a process to introduce an element of proportionality into our voting system? That would certainly reassure our constituents.”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 4%Procedure 10%Aside 32%Claims 42%Promise 8%Positioning 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsthat is an excellent question, ThanksProcedure · 14 wordsbut first I want to come back to my colleague’s previous question about music.Procedure Aside · 45 wordsI want to recommend that he listen to Le Diable à Cinq, a group that has done La Petite Nation proud.1 This band just released a new album and I would invite my colleague to get a copy and listen to it all summer long.2AsideOff point Claims · 59 wordsAs for the issue of proportional representation or democratic reform, we tried to bring about democratic reform here and it became quite clear that there was a lack of consensus, both among parliamentarians and among Canadians.3 We have a great democracy. In my opinion, we have one of the best democratic systems in the world.Partly on point It is not perfect, Promise · 11 wordsbut that is why we are making a few changes today. Positioning · 7 wordsWe can be proud of our democracy.PositioningPartly on point

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