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Blaine Calkins

180 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Bob Zimmer (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I know third party advertising and the involvement of foreign governments in our elections is a big problem. It reared its head back in 2015. I am sure the member remembers back in the day. This is a headline from 2017: “Controversial Leadnow active in B.C. politics, Vancouver city affairs”. We originally sort of brought the evidence forward that this was occurring. The article refers to “claims filed last week with Elections Canada—and reported this week by the Calgary Herald—that foreign money ‘spawned’ Leadnow and helped fund an elaborate campaign to oust the ruling Conservative Party.” I would ask the member to speak to this issue. It is a big deal, and we even see our colleague across the way from Toronto affected by shenanigans in elections. Maybe the member can just speak to what happened back in 2015.”
Statement grade
C
64 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 96%Positioning 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 141 wordsI think my friend from Prince George—Peace River—Northern Rockies and I would have very similar constituents.1 They are hard-working, honest, patriotic, law-abiding Canadians who love going hunting and fishing. They work in forestry, mining, oil and gas and agriculture.2Off point These are folks who are very concerned about foreign money coming from foundations. Folks at home who want to go and look this up can take a look at some of these foundations, like the Gordon and Betty Moore Foundation or the Tides foundation.3 These organizations do not just have a few thousand or a few hundred thousand dollars, or even a few million dollars. They actually have assets worth billions of dollars, 4and they are able to create organizations, like Leadnow, in another country and then fund them, with this massive foundation that they have, to influence policies in another country.5 Positioning · 4 wordsThis is very problematic.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsA good friend of mine, Vivian Krause, has actually exposed much of how this money gets brought into Canada to fund various organizations and groups to block resource development in Canada.6 Positioning · 4 wordsIt is very frustrating.PositioningPartly on point

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