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Andrew Lawton

159 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Ellis Ross (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the member was knowledgeable in his comments and his speech on Bill C-9. I spoke to this bill. As an indigenous person, coming from the Indian Act and knowing that natives did not have rights until the last 50 years, I was shocked at this. The issue is the potential attack not only against faith leaders but also against the fundamental principle of freedom of all manners. I cannot understand why the House has not taken the charter seriously. We are actually playing politics with it. With respect to the motion that my colleague has put on the floor, is there any chance the Liberal government will come to its senses and support it? If not, what are the options for us as Conservatives on behalf of Canadians?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 36%Aside 22%The ask 13%Reasoning 29%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 27 wordsit is such an honour to work alongside my colleague from Skeena—Bulkley Valley. I have been such an admirer of his work for a great many years.Thanks Aside · 35 wordsI look across the aisle, Partly on pointand the eye rolls I see and the giggles I hear make me think that perhaps we do not have a huge amount of faith that the motion will succeed, AsideThe ask · 20 wordsbut I hope that the Liberals who are not perhaps listening to this right now will do the right thing. Thanks · 31 wordsMy colleague has made some tremendous observations, in and out of the chamber, about the government’s history with indigenous peoples, and this is something I value learning more and more about.Thanks Reasoning · 46 wordsI think the takeaway is that regardless of someone’s beliefs, regardless of their identity, the very worst thing the government can do is impose its value system and its belief system on them. That is what we need to stand up against quite firmly and irrevocably.Partly on point

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