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Marilyn Gladu

167 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Marc Dalton (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I see that the member for Sarnia—Lambton—Bkejwanong has certainly been drinking the Liberal Kool‑Aid, with her jargon, “build Canada strong” and “investment”. One important industry she did not really refer to is the automobile industry and how it has dropped from over 2.5 million units to, now, under one million. There has been a free fall there. That is one sector. There is also EV manufacturing. I think of the different companies. Honda’s $15‑billion EV and battery complex has been scrapped. Northvolt has been cut. It has been a free fall. I wonder if the member would agree with me that these Liberal investments have actually been very dubious and unfruitful.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 19%Promise 20%Claims 42%Anecdote 8%Reasoning 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 32 wordswhat I would like to say is that I actually believe the things that I just said, that it is very good news and that we are moving in a positive direction.Positioning Promise · 33 wordsIf I were prime minister, what would I do? I would diversify trade from the U.S. I would build major projects in infrastructure in Canada.Vague promise I would work to address the affordability issues.Partly on pointVague promise Claims · 70 wordsAll of the things our government is doing are the things I would do myself. The member raised the issue of EVs, and of course, everything I think about EVs has been clear on the public record for years and years, Partly on pointbut the automotive sector has been super hard hit by these unjustified tariffs from the U.S. The President in the south’s idea is to take apart the supply chain.1 Anecdote · 14 wordsI am old enough to remember when the supply chain was first put together.Anecdote Reasoning · 18 wordsThis is going to be punishment that we will have to support industry through for quite a while.

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