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Marilyn Gladu

104 words · 5 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Dave Epp (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, the member just responded to my colleague and said, “I believe the things I say.” She also concluded her speech with, “Our new government is on the right track.” I want to read a quote from March 10 of this year: “Mr. Speaker, the motion we are going to vote on today is another example of the government’s overreach and tyranny and of how it always wants to shut down debate, especially when it comes to freedom of expression and freedom of religion.” As for the member’s response of “I believe the things I say,” how does she reconcile those two quotes from herself?”
Statement grade
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30 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 100%

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Positioning · 104 wordsActually, Mr. Speaker, everything that I have ever said is on the public record in Hansard. Every Liberal on this side knows everything I said, the Prime Minister knows everything I said, and they all know everything I think. They welcomed me inside the tent to help build Canada strong, to put my talents to work, and to use my wisdom, my skills and my experience to drive Canada in the right direction. I am super proud to be part of this team, and that is why it is easy for me to get up and bring the good news. I do believe it.PositioningOff point

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