Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Don Davies

153 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

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Procedure 10%Claims 66%Thanks 20%Aside 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsI rise today to mark Philippine Independence Day and to celebrate Filipino Heritage Month across Canada.12Procedure Claims · 40 wordsI was honoured to join many friends in the Filipino Canadian community for the annual flag raising ceremony at Filipino Plaza in the heart of Vancouver Kingsway.3 It was a proud celebration of bayanihan, representing unity, co-operation and selfless aid. Thanks · 18 wordsI give many thanks to the United Filipino Canadian Associations in British Columbia for organizing this fabulous event.Thanks Claims · 61 wordsMore than one million Filipino Canadians call Canada home, 4and their contributions strengthen our nation economically, culturally, politically and socially. In every vocation and profession from health care to education, skilled trades, business and public service, Filipino Canadians play an essential role in building our country. Their generosity, resilience, faith and love of life enrich our society and inspire us all. Thanks · 13 wordsI thank the Filipino Canadian community for everything they contribute to our world.Thanks Aside · 5 wordsMaligayang Araw ng Kalayaan. Mabuhay.Aside

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