Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 1%Claims 79%Thanks 11%The ask 10%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 1 wordsmabuhay.GreetingClaims · 29 wordsWe had a wonderful ceremony yesterday: a flag raising on Parliament Hill.1We also had a wonderful reception last night that was co-hosted with Ambassador Chan-Gonzaga and the embassy.2Thanks · 15 wordsThey did an outstanding job working with the Canada parliamentary friendship group with the Philippines.ThanksClaims · 77 wordsThe Philippines is a part of Canada’s very fabric.In the month of June, not only do we celebrate Philippine Independence Day, but we also recognize just how important the Filipino Canadian community is.It is one million people strong and has an impact and is part of our fabric in every region of our great nation.3We have flag raising ceremonies, as was pointed out, in Vancouver and in Winnipeg.4There are all sorts of celebrations.The ask · 13 wordsEnjoy the month of June, and let us celebrate Filipino culture and heritage.