Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Claims 85%Thanks 13%Greeting 2%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 128 wordsin celebration of Seniors Month, I was pleased to join with MPP Steve Clark to host our first annual Seniors Expo.1This week at New Hope Church in Brockville, in partnership with Senior Support Services Lanark, Leeds & Grenville, we welcomed more than 160 seniors and dozens of exhibitors.23We heard from great presenters, including the Leeds Grenville Paramedic Service, the Brockville General Hospital’s hospital-to-home program, the Brockville 50+ Activity Centre, the Stroke Network of Southeastern Ontario, Rideau Community Health Services dental programs and many others.4Complete with fitness breaks and lunch, this event was open to seniors at no cost.5It was a wonderful way to bring our community together, share helpful resources that support seniors and their families, and recognize the incredible contributions of our seniors.Thanks · 20 wordsI want to take this opportunity to thank the men and women who built our country and built our community.ThanksGreeting · 3 wordsHappy Seniors Month.Greeting